A Poem by Chowa

Author: Chowa
Created: February 27, 2010 at 12:09 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Friendship | Romance | Sad
Upload Stats: 3.75 Stars by 2 users with 2 comments and 185 views

Seperate Ways  

We walked a while
To gather our thoughts
Our relationship
Has gathered noughts

My fragile heart says
He was the one for me
But its, the where have you been
His quizzing first degree

His jealousy took over
The good times that we had
As he walks away
My heart feels glad

But will i know in the morning
With these second thoughts
Our relationship
Were they all actually noughts

© Chowa - all rights reserved

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March 02, 2010
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Enjoyed reading it as many people can resonate

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February 28, 2010
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Good Write
This is a good poem because it looks within at our selves.......our motives and our dreams......Sometimes, when our dreams are realized, it make that introspective look a happy one.......but sometimes, it just makes noughts......nought is not a word that you hear everyday, I heard my grandparents use it.......There's some memories.....Whiskurz

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