A Poem by torchie


Author: torchie
Created: January 18, 2010 at 07:19 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: General/Other | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4.66 Stars by 3 users with 3 comments and 336 views

Daydreaming  

Bubbles drift upward
in unending stream--
each one a promise,
then a shattered dream:
ethereal phantom
that longs to take form
but when you grasp it,
it's gone and you mourn.






© torchie - all rights reserved

Author Notes


Daydreaming is a fantasy a person has while awake and not usually connected to the immediate situation. It is sometimes looked upon negatively in a society that emphasizes productivity but it can also be an enjoyable and cost efficient way to relax--a mini vacation from tension, if you will



 
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blossomwriter
January 14, 2014
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Ethereal!
The embodiment of this poem is ethereal, I love it, as you write every word shakes in me. I can feel the rythmn of it's sound, the prose was timely and real. I wish I could convey such power as you in each of my poetic imagery and sentences. I have worked for years on my poetry and it is still along ways from being this.


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MsButterfly
May 30, 2010
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This poem id very nicley written
Short and berief but explains alot
good job


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mznini
January 18, 2010
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i really like this!! it's light & airy yet sad at the same time. i can relate (:


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