A Poem by SimpleWords


Author: SimpleWords
Created: December 30, 2009 at 05:25 pm
Upload Type: Poem, T (13+)  
Category: Romance | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4.62 Stars by 4 users with 4 comments and 180 views

Everyone Needs a Hero™  

+Everyone Needs a Hero+


Ugh,
This evil villain taking over my body.
Telling me things that are untrue.

Ripping me apart,
Eating my soul,
Beating on my heart too.

Wicked laughs sew with lace,
All the darkness made,
Like silk.

Nothing seems real anymore!
All the lies, white as milk!

The abyss wraps around my heart,
Like an abyss falling apart,

Hurry!
And don't let it bring me down ...
Hurry, and give me your love.
Be my hero now.


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Author Notes


Everyone needs a hero.


 
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Comments & Reviews



ArtSun
January 01, 2010
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Nice work on this poem...


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roselora
December 31, 2009
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amazing
this is a n awesome write.....i loved it


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andycapped
December 31, 2009
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I LOVED THE WORDING , YOU HAVE YOUR OWN STYLE, YOU ARE UNIGUE. YOU ARE LOVE/HATED BY MANY. GREAT POEM!!!! A*C*


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Azim
December 30, 2009
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Good job
Aww i like this...the beginning part seems alot like my style of writing. Its cute though, good job.


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