A Poem by dragonpoet


Author: dragonpoet
Created: August 30, 2009 at 08:29 am
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: War | Contemporary | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4.75 Stars by 2 users with 4 comments and 282 views

Determination for Termination  

We fought with great passion
‘Til the earth was ashen

Now we must fight again

To let peace germinate
And all war terminate


© dragonpoet - all rights reserved

Author Notes


I know this is short but I hope it gets its point across


 
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Mckie-Asher
September 08, 2013
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I get it, people just need to chill out, no matter how many people say its only human nature theres no need to it. . . . .great poem, really but I wish it were longer


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Synchro
March 05, 2012
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I especially appreciate
the comment on peace and war in your autobiographical statement. Let me encourage
a trend, here. The subject does not get nearly enough attention. Your point seems to be in this poem, that peace will grow in our minds. I hope you are right, though it seems
that talk of war grows still faster. We havn't moved very far as a species. :-(


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jeanthomas
August 31, 2009
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short but true. but what medium do we use in fighting to attain peace? well, this is quite an argument but i won't heed to it. LOL i like this. short but powerful. keep it up.


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dgal
August 30, 2009
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great write.


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