A Poem by JenJen_18


Author: JenJen_18
Created: June 23, 2008 at 08:07 pm
Upload Type: Poem, M (16+)  
Category: Romance | Fantasy | Adult
Upload Stats: 4.5 Stars by 2 users with 2 comments and 289 views

Magnetism ;-)  

as she sheds thru herself

melting from his gaze

down down fallin for him

both falling, not wanting up

don't know where their going

soft touches all around

lips never leaving each other

only to repeat the action

vivacity takes place of breathing

lost in a single experience

the world doesn't matter

life depends on the other

down there she goes

seeing if he can take it

love defined as simplicity

the joy of affinity


© JenJen_18 - all rights reserved


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Comments & Reviews ( X 1)



Sourav
December 31, 2008
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'Joy of affinity'... that's a good line! Nice to read. I enjoyed this write of yours. It's certainly a good write.


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simon
July 23, 2008
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good
am not a person that gives bad reviews, but i liked the poem alot it was straight forward, but what i do love is your profile, you sound like a great person. so open and straight forward. good luck to you friend. check out my site sometimes, leave some comments


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InSpire
June 26, 2008
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needs work


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