A Poem by legally_pink1013


Author: legally_pink1013
Created: October 30, 2007 at 10:02 am
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: General/Other | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 3.5 Stars by 2 users with 2 comments and 266 views

Day by Day  

Day by Day, Night by night
Hurt and pain's all that's in sight.
Crystal clear blue tears falling from my eyes
Dark stormy even worse terrible crucial skies.
Hot summer days with too many showers
Happiness is here but only for a few hours
Your voice ringing in my ears from our last call
I had risked everything just to have it all.
Your tender touch and warming kiss,
all our love wasn't just a bliss.
Hope is all that's left of me but in my eyes why can't they see?
You're the reason I'm so glad...
But they're the reason I'm so sad.
Even though we'll never be...
In the end my heart will thrive for the love we left alive.




2007 Erika Blount
All Rights Reserved


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Thirteen
January 07, 2009
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cheer up chik, love is everything to some people but to others it's just an excuse to fake being with someone.


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Bella07
October 30, 2007
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your poem was expressed with such feeling I feel the saddness through your words, Good Work


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