A Poem by Silverblue


Author: Silverblue
Created: April 16, 2018 at 09:46 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: General/Other | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4.75 Stars by 2 users with 2 comments and 21 views

Ideal World  

Heart, mind, body and soul
Wait a while to reach their goal
Catches diamonds, digs a hole
Then open out their arms

Is there any sense in life
Problems seem forever rife
Cutting hope without a knife
They issue out alarms

Take a ticket, board a plane
Refusing to go back again
Is that the freedom from the pain
Not doing, is not knowing

Not much changes down the years
A similar amount of tears
An empty room the thing that hears
And emptiness is growing

Before you let it instigate
Remember that it's not too late
To know it's mostly filled with hate
Feed it, it will rise

Take the choice to make the break
Snap the chains, make no mistake
Life can be a constant ache
I've seen it with these eyes

I've felt it in the core of me
I don't know if you're ever free
But somewhere else you need to be
Stop the clock, move on

All good things must have their time
The messages, the words, the rhyme
Return some day, It's not a crime
If you feel you must be gone.....








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matelotrod
April 18, 2018
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Another Good-un
Very interesting content, brings many thoughts to the fore yet still introduces cases that we have all experienced over a lifetime. I really enjoyed this Well done. Take care Rod.
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kitty
April 17, 2018
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Most relevant these words
Verse three could be written for me. Words here are so touching. Thank you for sharing.
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