A Poem by heartbeats

Author: heartbeats
Created: April 11, 2018 at 09:15 am
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Romance | Love | Sad
Upload Stats: 4.37 Stars by 4 users with 5 comments and 56 views

You are in my heart  

You are in my Heart.
I know we have gone different ways in life but you are a in my heart. I still love you even though I know I should not. I always look out for you and I realize that in you own way you were trying to look out for me. I love you still even now even though time will never let us be together. Your passion and mine was always so rare it was like a lighting that came without a warning. I know I said goodbye and left and even today I wish I could step back in time and not leave but life isn't always what we want it's about doing what is best.
You and I had go on different paths in this world. I think about us all the time even though it isn't right to miss what I throw away. You always were the one who push me to be a better person and yet all I want to do is run back to us. I know life isn't fair and I must carry on without you by my side.
You are in my Heart maybe one day I will not have pain or sadness when looking back on what could have been. I remember the moments we shared and all those thoughts make me want to cry out and say I miss you and want to come back but I know I cannot because life is leading us in different ways. You are better off without me and I am able to cope without you even though it is the last thing I want to do.
May God look after you as I wish I could. I love you even as my heart will never stop loving you. You gave me peace where I had no peace. I will always have our love in my heart even if I cannot be with you any more.   

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April 14, 2018
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Very touching.

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April 12, 2018
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Yesterday can be a really difficult thing to say good bye to. Your poem is sincere and, I think, relates to experiences just about any of us have had at some point or points in life. That's certainly true for me. In reading You are in my heart, I had the impression you were trying to work something out through writing, and if that's the case, I hope that it helped you. I wish you all the strength to stay the road you are compelled to travel on, and I hope to come across other poems of yours on the subject as you go through the phases needed to carry on.

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April 11, 2018
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I think the words here are very heartfelt and genuine, with some well thought out description. I think it would be good to see it written in stanzas, rather than a continual piece. It would be a challenge yes, but one you might take to well, and enjoy doing. All the same, this is well constructed, and full of strong feelings and emotion. All the best to you.

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April 11, 2018
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Hello muy name is Timmie. This is the first piece of your writing that i habe gotten the opportunity to read. Thank you For sharing. Awww what a sad but lovely little poem you have created here. I think all of us can relate to this one at one point in our lives. You are asking for critical reviews hun so i will highly suggest that you structure this one like a poem should be. Proper structure guides the reader and allows the writer to control the rhythm and flow of the content. There are also a couple of grammatical errors, but those are easily fixed. Take care and i shall look forward to seeing more of your writing in the future.

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April 11, 2018
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"We always hurt the ones
..we love, the ones we shouldn't hurt at all. We always take the sweetest rose and crush it till the petals fall...". It is my firm belief that when common sense prevails a sensible and rational person will do a 'Libra' ~ weigh the scales up and decide what's best for all concerned. Words worth taking on board.

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