A Poem by clb520


Author: clb520
Created: January 13, 2018 at 05:34 am
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Environment | Free Verse | Nature
Upload Stats: 5 Stars by 3 users with 3 comments and 33 views

No Place Like Home  

No Place Like Home
Come with me, and you will see.
Magic in the land that grows the big tall trees.
Stop and listen, can you hear.
The birds that are singing far and near.
Fairies wings are fluttering from pure delight.
Sunshine is warming, no more cold of the night.
The old fat gnomes all live under the willow trees.
Up on the left, to the right, near the Red Lilies.
The bees are all abuzz, with their bumble buzzy songs.
Us pixies wake the flowers, so they can sing along.
The garden we live in is grown with great love.
We thank our lucky stars and the heavens above.
When all is said and done and day turns back to night.
Serenity hugs us all, until we see mornings light.





By: clb520
06/28/2016


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Comments & Reviews ( X 3)



michaelgallatin
January 15, 2018
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Fairies, gnomes and...
pixies, nice! Fantasy (unless they are real of course!) has a definite place in the life of this world and the people who live on it. Fantasy softens, makes ethereal, leads to dreams, inspires in a pleasant way, cheers and calms and most of all, takes us away for awhile from an often harsh and cruel world. This poem is beautiful! I so wish to find this place and to rest, dream, gaze, cherish, love and live for awhile! Very fine and a SL!

Namaste,
Mike
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PoetGLG123
January 14, 2018
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Wow! What a great piece! I love your imagery! You have put some clever wordplay into it as well. Your right there is no place like home.
Keep up the great work.


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matelotrod
January 13, 2018
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Home sweet home
Sounds like a perfect place to be, I would like to do just that but I'm afraid the Rats and foxes might get me. One of the joys of living in the country!! Very enjoyable piece Thanks for sharing. Rod.
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