A Poem by clb520


Author: clb520
Created: January 13, 2018 at 05:30 am
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Free Verse | Dark | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4.66 Stars by 3 users with 3 comments and 25 views

Audacity  

Audacity
Brutality is Reality
Making your life a Fatality
Morality determines Mentality
Unrelenting Insanity
Vitality is a drive from Urbanity
Inanity perpetuates Profanity
Mundanity a fake posh Formality
Humanity is Volcanity




by:clb520
01/22/2017



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Comments & Reviews ( X 2)



michaelgallatin
January 17, 2018
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An interesting ditty...
with a massive use of "ity" yet somehow not too shi%%y! I enjoyed the read and I think I even got meaning from parts of it. For Line Four though I would argue that these days quite too often Immorality determines Mentality. And I might likely have used a slightly different wording and ended with Humanity is Insanity which is sadly an ongoing theme in many of my darker poems. Well said and well crafted!

Namaste,
Mike


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PoetGLG123
January 14, 2018
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Awsome use of word play and rhyming! love it! Keep on writing like this. Good good stuff! You have a new fan. .


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matelotrod
January 14, 2018
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Wow
I wanted to review and show my Vanity but it just caused a calamity. Great usage of words that started my old brain ticking. Well done. Rod.
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