A Poem by clb520


Author: clb520
Created: January 13, 2018 at 05:25 am
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Free Verse | Despair | Friendship
Upload Stats: 4.25 Stars by 4 users with 4 comments and 102 views

If...  

If...
I wish I had a Looking Glass, to magnify the words you say.
For deep within they're all weaved with dishonesty & lies.
Is it to make your life better, if only in your eyes?
No matter what you say or what you do, any life you've built is sickly untrue.
Pity is not a word I would choose for you.
That's reserved for people who know not what they do.
Ruthless, conniving, evil to the bone, is just a few.
Has it ever come to mind, someday you must atone?




by: CLB520-2018


Last Modified: January 13, 2018 at 05:52 am
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Comments & Reviews



AdaezeMbakwe
January 30, 2018
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Great stuff!
Love how the poem is concise and goes straight to the point.

The conclusion is apt: There is always a day of reckoning.


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raidonce
January 24, 2018
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Really good.
Deep.


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davolad
January 19, 2018
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REVEALING
What a great poem. It cost nothing to be truthful always.At dawn truth will be crowned chasing away far falsehood.Welldone.Keep moving.


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EdwinBozie
January 13, 2018
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Quite a sad poem
This is a sad poem in that it appears to be full of negativity. The persona of this poem appears to be sickened by dishonesty, in that it appears that they have been hurt by a web of lies. In terms of quality relating to choice of diction, rhyme pattern and musical quality, the poem is impressive but I was not impressed with the negativity of its theme.


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