A Poem by blossomwriter

Author: blossomwriter
Created: January 11, 2018 at 04:13 am
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Love | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4.75 Stars by 2 users with 2 comments and 121 views


Daughter your still crying
and I'm apologizing
because I'm not weak 
and I'm still strong
battling a war since you've been born
of all the way things that  were 
that could never be right
trying to find ways to make them so
sound in your world so that you would know
the ways of a warrriors heart
like a Valkyrie I could slay
just to make everything Okay
and I know that you are tired 
and I know that you've just been born 
but just stay with me alittle while
and see the way things torn
can be complete again so that we can mend again
and all of this pain we'd transcend 
as though it never were and we could beat again
as though we were not alone 
battling this war as cold as stone
you know of a fathers heart a bastards sword
sticking to the ice as a thorn
i love like you've just been born
i swaddled you in baby's breath 
I tucked you in my wing asunder
i keep you safe and warm from the storms
that held you under
i almost cried my last  breath
your name is all I ever knew
the last external heart beat
i thought I ever drew.

Last Modified: January 11, 2018 at 04:17 am
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Author Notes

I'll never give up on you

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January 19, 2018
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Touching.Keep moving.

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January 12, 2018
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A forever 'Mom'.
Poignant in content and structure. Every caring mother knows! Concept enfolds the reader. Thanks

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