A Poem by michaelgallatin

Author: michaelgallatin
Created: January 09, 2018 at 03:42 pm
Upload Type: Poem, A (18+)  
Category: Horror | Psychology | Dark
Upload Stats: 4.66 Stars by 3 users with 4 comments and 109 views

Time To Kill  

Out of prison for some time
so he had honed his skill.
And it was now the dark of night
so he had time to kill.

He had started with the homeless
who were living on the street.
Nobody would ever miss them
and he found that very neat.

Then he moved up to working girls
as he grew more sick.
Watching their faces as they died
was a far greater kick.

He never twice used the same MO
for killing was his art.
Knife, gun, hammer, chord or hands
and it was time to start.

Graduating to the little ones
though sex was not his reason.
For he just thought it would be fun
in this brand new Christmas season.

So for them he had a present
better than his crystal meth.
He'd give them something to remember
for it would be their death!

Michael "A Glimpse Of A Very Sick Mind!" Gallatin

Last Modified: January 20, 2018 at 12:07 pm
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Author Notes

Once in awhile I have to go to the darkside because damn it sadly it is out there!

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Comments & Reviews ( X 5)

January 19, 2018
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Very Interesting Piece
By the words of your voice, by the rhythm of your dark verses, clarity can been seen in your character. Humanity is blessed with light and darkness, and it is our choice which side we wish to cross paths with. Nevertheless, both paths lead to greatness. For the light cannot reside without the darkness, and the darkness cannot reside without the light. This poem is provoked by darkness, but it does not mean it is not beautiful. For you have placed your heart into writing this poem, and it's outcome resulted in being viewed by many. Keep up the rhythm flow, for your flow has talent.

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January 11, 2018
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You have opened my eyes with this one Mike, love to know what provoked it and hope there is no connection between you and him. Only kidding. The trouble is there are people like this amongst us and when they are finally caught we are more than just surprised we are amazed that they had the ability to fool the public of their guilt. Great poem Mike and very thought provoking. Keep your door locked SL Rod.

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January 10, 2018
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I love the eeriness and darkness that this poems has.
good job!! keep up the good work

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January 10, 2018
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Yes indeed!
Bringing home the realities of life Michael. Some of us prefer to pretend it does not exist....but it does in the minds of very sick and demented people who do live amongst us. Profound write!

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