A Poem by Littlesong


Author: Littlesong
Created: December 05, 2017 at 09:35 am
Upload Type: Poem, M (16+)  
Category: Spiritual | Love | Free Verse
Upload Stats: 4.33 Stars by 3 users with 4 comments and 45 views

Breath
 



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Breath~

Heaven shudders
dim noises of wonders
they gleam
Finding their paths through ether
occult splendour
Reflected in my longing heart

I can hear the Nature's voices
moaning through ardent realm
awaiting the rebirth
the labour of new Creator
and I can feel His first sighs
whispering, commanding
each of my senses
"Come fill my well of thirst"
~~~
It's the rapturous Majesty
The loving of universe
Through You
It's the glorious divinity
of an adoring Deity
Drifting me through
It's simply
Your Soul's breath
Breathtaking~
My entity.


© Gh~*
11.7.2017


 


 




 



 


 






Last Modified: December 05, 2017 at 10:04 am
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Comments & Reviews ( X 6)



ArtSun
December 09, 2017
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Mystical...
This is a nicely written poem, the mystical of Breath and the entity give it an emphasis of your thoughts...nice...


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kitty
December 06, 2017
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Lovely!
Love in all splendour and sensitivity owns the mind, body and soul. A beautiful 'creation' my friend.
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JohnCreekmore
December 05, 2017
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Second Coming?
In this offering the poet uses images that are reminiscent of religious scriptures. There is a reference to the rebirth of a "new Creator," the capitalization immediately giving the impression that a deity is being mentioned. I don't think any particular religious concept is being cited here; rather, the reference is probably to the spirit of love itself. Later on, we understand it is the loving of the universe through "You," indicating a specific individual is being addressed. The last stanza seems to reinforce the notion of a loving universe manifesting through an individual love. The poem ends with the idea of a merging of souls through love. Thus we have the divine and the human presenting as one. Quite mystical, quite sensuous. Well done.
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chrome
December 05, 2017
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Great!!!!
Its a great depiction of how God gave life to mankind.


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