A Poem by seriouspoet

Author: seriouspoet
Created: December 04, 2017 at 08:40 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Love | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4.75 Stars by 4 users with 4 comments and 104 views


You are the burning desire
Of many men
Because you are more beautiful
Than an Irish green meadow
That just awakened
But I love you
For your inner loveliness
When my schooner was caught
In the midst of a powerful tempest
You were my lighthouse
And my ethereal song
That calmed the sea
When your skin is wrinkled
And your hair grey
My kiss upon your lips
Will be just as tender
Like the virgin buds of spring
And wings of tulips
That majestically take flight

© seriouspoet - all rights reserved

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Comments & Reviews ( X 6)

January 19, 2018
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A poem expressing a deep love that is not temporal.The Poet reassuring his lover that even at old age ,his love is ever fresh.Good figurative expression.Nice one.Keep moving.

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December 09, 2017
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Nice work
nicely written poem, love the view of aging and tenderly loving kissing ...nicely written.

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December 08, 2017
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This is..
Gorgeous, romantic and so beautifully descriptive. It deserves a spotlight! Caroline xx

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December 04, 2017
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Pure Love
This work tells of a kind of love that goes beyond physical attraction. The poet describes a bond that saw him through the storm, whether metaphorically or in reality. He also describes an affection that will outlast the ravages of time. The sentiment is beautiful, as is the exquisite imagery. Well done.

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