A Poem by shar1968


Author: shar1968
Created: November 29, 2017 at 05:08 am
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Philosophy | General/Other | Nature
Upload Stats: 4.5 Stars by 1 users with 1 comments and 168 views

Make  

Beautiful nature,
        


Sensible mind,
        


Make miracle.
         



© shar1968 - all rights reserved

Author Notes


It is a small and meaningful poem made with six words.



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michaelgallatin
January 03, 2018
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Very short and...
simply said. Yet in simplicity one can sometimes find the profound. Many years ago my college roommate and best friend wrote; "Life, with time, is a puddle muddled in, come wade." I have always loved the simple yet deep beauty in these few words. I find this piece to be similar. A lot said in just six words. And in this often crazy world if we can keep our minds sensible and our natures beautiful it is a miracle. Also a miracle to honor Nature which often we don't do well. Loving people as I do all I would add to this is either "be kind" or "be loving".

Namaste,
Mike
applaud



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Thank you for comments and review. Thanks poet michaelgallatin!


 shar1968 replied on February 10, 2018




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