A Poem by stellarram

Author: stellarram
Created: November 22, 2017 at 02:13 am
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Philosophy | Contemporary | Nature
Upload Stats: 4.5 Stars by 3 users with 4 comments and 220 views


My senses love wandering.
Sometimes in awe of beauty, they are found meandering.

My kinky looks left people wondering...
My words and actions may resemble some sort of soft thundering.

Life is too short to be serious.
Universe is too long to be tedious.

Live within yourselves and respecting other's space.
All events concoct to form an intriguing maze.

Try to wander into that maze...
While doing so, please don't be in a haze...

© Stellar Ram 2017

© stellarram - all rights reserved

Author Notes

To start my comeback to this site, here is a simple poem about a soul who loves wandering. Your comments are welcome.

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November 25, 2017
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Loved this
I really love the flow of this poem. It's really beautiful.

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November 25, 2017
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Lots of people try to use form, but you manage to use it tellingly. Thank you Spotlight.

Thanks a lot RobinD! I am glad that you liked it. If you have time, please read my other works as well. Thank you so much once again! 😊

 stellarram replied on November 27, 2017

Thank you so much for the spotlight Julian! I hope my future works are also this much worthy. I am really gleeful that you took time to do this. Thanks again!

 stellarram replied on November 27, 2017

November 25, 2017
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A good return to the site
I too am a wanderer but coming to grips with what I'm still refusing to call old-age. The succinctness of your couplets hides a depth of feeling and understanding that stirred me. Thank you.

Thank you so much for your review! Much appreciated.

 stellarram replied on November 25, 2017

November 24, 2017
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Well written and make an important point. So glad to see WN back and hope it stays.

Yes EltonCamp, Sir! Glad to see you too. We hope that WN doesn't lose its Mojo once again. 😊 Thanks for taking time to review this piece.

 stellarram replied on November 25, 2017

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