A Poem by carol28

Author: carol28
Created: November 17, 2017 at 01:57 am
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Love | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4.75 Stars by 4 users with 4 comments and 206 views

Rainy Days Remind Me Of You  

Raindrops hitting the window pane, 
The fire crackling in the fireplace.
I start walking down the memory lane,
Reminiscing the good old days.

I miss those rainy days spent with you,
Cuddling, feeling safe and warm.
All the day’s stress fading away,
While you held me tightly in your arms.

Then you’d read me your favourite book,
In your most soothing voice,
Relaxing every tired cells of my body,
Declining the world’s noise.

Rainy days remind me of you,
Raindrops flood me with past memories.
I hope you miss them like I do,
I hope you still recall our stories. 

I wonder why our story had to end,
Maybe we were too young to mend,
A ‘happy ending’ was never meant to be,
I lost a lover and a best friend.

© carol28 - all rights reserved

Author Notes

Lost love. 

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Comments & Reviews ( X 7)

November 18, 2017
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I love this
Oh my, this truly touched my heart in a place I am trying to heal. Your words ring true to me ...this is lovely poetry! Sl caroxx

Thank you so much Caroline. I pray that you heal good and heal soon. Much love. 

 carol28 replied on November 19, 2017

November 18, 2017
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Beautiful poem, Carol. Where I am sitting, watching a rainy day through the window, this was a perfect read. Thank you. A soft, nostalgic pace, for a slow day. One that leaves more time for memories.

Thank you so much for reading it. I love watching rainy days through my window. It brings all the needed peace to the mind and soul. 

 carol28 replied on November 19, 2017

November 18, 2017
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Fully understand
Nothing like a rain storm to bring back memory moments. It is also good to read rhyming poetry, it seems we are going downhill lately. I have never been a free verse fan but lately I find only free verse no matter which site I look on. Enjoyed this one and hope it wasn't based on a true story. Thanks for writing it. Rod.

Thank you so much Matelotrod
Half of it is based on a true story

 carol28 replied on November 19, 2017

November 17, 2017
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Definitely can relate. The way that you put your words, I can visualize how you're feeling. Great piece of work. Keep it up

Thank you very much

 carol28 replied on November 19, 2017

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