A Poem by leo1129


Author: leo1129
Created: May 18, 2017 at 06:06 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: General/Other | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 1 comments and 15 views

Thinking

                         Thinking of all that I have been through.
                     Thinking of that one love that I lost.
                    But most of all thinking of how blessed I am by God.
                   Thinking of not what I have but all that do.
                  Thank for where you are now for that is the right place.


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JimSlaughter
May 20, 2017
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A very lovely little piece, leo1129...but very big on content. If "one love" is all that you have lost, that is, indeed, something to be thankful for. Questions: Line 4--"..but all that I do" (?), and the last line, should "Thank..." be "Thankful..."?


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