A Poem by kitty


Author: kitty
Created: April 19, 2017 at 01:01 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Fantasy | Romance | Free Verse
Upload Stats: 4 Stars by 2 users with 2 comments and 49 views

I HAD A DREAM  

                       I HAD A DREAM   

I had a dream about a man with that magic touch
                  making it right for me ...
 Wanting the world to see 
how much he cares for me.

He'll gracefully hold my hand  ...
give me command of land >>>
where my heart and soul will be aglow:
other men's deeds will be as white as snow.

A 'Queen' I'll be. We'll reign in harmony
We'll work to build an enigma, a mythical
                    fairy tale dream.
 The gardens will be in full bloom 
with many an exquisite flowers - in tune with June:

never will the sun go down on us. 
the moon will choose to disappear - just,
allowing twinkly stars to show their graces
            and faces ..a must!

For me he'll croon by the light of that  'silvery moon'
Our home will be that castle on the hill
with a view so magnificent ~ just for 'US'
perfect scene, perfect dream ~ perfect US.

Dare not burst the bubble now >>>
why wake up from a dream to come back to 
a reality that can be relatively unkind to a dreamers 
                            mind.


Created @ 4.10 PM on the 17th April 2017


© kitty - all rights reserved

Author Notes


Another frivolous piece thrown together to make light of today's headlines. 

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Comments & Reviews ( X 3)



TSMclaughlan
April 20, 2017
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An interesting piece makes you think about the people in your own life



(Author)
Thank you for this meaningful visit and for the gifts you've offered. 

 kitty replied on April 20, 2017




Littlesong
April 19, 2017
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What a really dreamy feeling You allow us, leave us, to swim within... only those true romantic, true lover will understand the world lays behind Your bright gentle sweet beautiful words.... I love this, I love it so much, always my pleasure to read Your ever fantastic dreaming pen, heart and spirit, thank You for a peaceful wonderful read before my sleep.
applaudapplaudapplaud



(Author)
You are most welcome my true and understanding friend. pleasant dreams. Your reviews are so comforting. 

 kitty replied on April 19, 2017




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