A Poem by RobertRonnow


Author: RobertRonnow
Created: January 22, 2017 at 05:27 am
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Free Verse | Writing | General/Other
Upload Stats: 1 comments and 82 views

Long As You're Living

Quiet morning.
Successful surgery.

No tv!
Watch weather.

Do nothing.
Be nameless.

Suppose cows.
Scare crows.

Harmless habits.
Armless robot.

Like a delusion.
A late night movie.

Expect to forget
and be forgotten. Information.

Interstate.
Toilet seat.

How soon after cryogenesis
can one cry or ejaculate?


© RobertRonnow - all rights reserved

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www.ronnowpoetry.com


 
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Archia
February 28, 2017
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This is interesting. There's probably a lot more to it than I see when I read it and I think it's very open to interpretation. Some of the lines seemed a bti random but I liked the ending, I think it did help tie things together a bit more and it made it seem more like an overall poem. It's a very interesting poem to read adn think about.


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