A Poem by WakeTheMoon

Author: WakeTheMoon
Created: February 07, 2016 at 07:12 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Romance | Love | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4.85 Stars by 7 users with 8 comments and 378 views

Passion's Hand  


Cold metal stairway
Pulls on my feet
In coming moments...
I feel our heat

Taken by desire
Molded by needs
Who could deny this
As passion screams

Desire felt rising
Needs physically felt
Down on your knees
Like butter, we melt

Screaming in secret
The lustfulness wins
Skin is on fire
Rapture begins

Last Modified: February 07, 2016 at 09:24 pm
© WakeTheMoon - all rights reserved

Author Notes

I have not posted a new write for the longest time. I returned to the site and had days and days of work to restore all my folders and re-work my pieces. I know this write looks very simple, but a lot of work goes into the graphics, the backgrounds and the music. I am glad to be back to writing. Hope you enjoy!

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Comments & Reviews ( X 19)

November 19, 2017
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So sensuous
Hello beautiful friend...I adore your writing. I am so happy to read you once again.. Of course, a spotlight is in order! This is just lovely, Caroline xx

The strangest thing-how writing has escaped me. Seems like this piece was from a different life. What if my pen is forever dry?

 WakeTheMoon replied on November 19, 2017

It won't be! I feel exactly as you do my friend, about my pen, but those words will come! Love you, Caro

 Caroline replied on December 08, 2017

September 20, 2016
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Speaks volumes
We all tread this path and you few words say it all great poem Sue

Thank you for visiting my pages, Anne. I have encountered much frustration on this site and rarely return.But your visit is greatly appreciated. Thank you and  my best to you.

 WakeTheMoon replied on September 30, 2016

June 21, 2016
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it feels good, too! :-)

Thank you sir

 WakeTheMoon replied on June 22, 2016

February 21, 2016
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soar up off the page, like streams of heat off pavement waves, and whom else can flow into one's senses, embracing wherever she wishes, however desired as You do, Sue?
I've no idea how long it's been since your last post, but when your pen spins the magic of romantic sensuality the way yours does, it could be an hour or a decade, for natural bliss is as timeless as the ages, and the allure of your poetry certainly feels ageless to me as it always has.
Look-up "vivid" in the dictionary, Sue, and any numbers of your poems will appear, and I really want to give you a warming hug for this one, Dear Poetess! ⁓ Richard

Oh, and a giant spotlight, too!

It helps so much to be read! I want to write more and more and the return flow of rhythmic words is so slow-in-coming for me. If I could get here and read, Im sure it would be a great boost! Thank you so much for leaving me such encouragement. You are very kind! Big hugs,dear Richard

 WakeTheMoon replied on February 21, 2016

February 08, 2016
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Though it is simple, but it's still sweetly and nicely written, with Your own touch, I love the music I'm listing to right now, it feels like the flame of love begins to lit softly then more intensely, a perfect feeling to flow with Your poem, so glad You back to us*

Thank you so much for leaving me your thoughts, that means alot to me. I am just very happy to be back among friends and co-writers. Hope to visit you soon

 WakeTheMoon replied on February 08, 2016

February 08, 2016
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deep rapture reined in to a taut delicate scent of senses spill or cascade down the spiral of the strength of the metalic staircase an alegory of our loves own strength to find comfort in the abandonment to rapture with in the bounds of our lovers own caress spotlight

It is wonderful to see you here,dear Em! I have every intention of visiting your pages soon. Thank you so much

 WakeTheMoon replied on February 09, 2016

February 08, 2016
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So glad to have you back Sue. Have missed the 'quality' write you always put on page. Let them flow!

Thank you so much for your kind words! Very much appreciated

 WakeTheMoon replied on February 09, 2016

February 07, 2016
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Your Romantic muse
has been awakened within a wonderful sizzle! I know the scare you had thinking everything in your files were lost to you. I am so very glad that they weren't. What a terrible loss, not only for yourself but for us who look forward to your musings, as well. It has been far too long since we have seen you. You are back in a blaze of glory. Raise my glass in a definite cheer. SL to you. Your page looks wonderful and your muse has awakened to decorate it with added beauty It is going to be a great week here! Hugs Lesa

Oh thank you so much, if not for your encouragement, I wouldn't be here! This music keeps changing, I have to look into it, but I just have a small sense of accomplishment to put something new up and have it appear as I wanted it too! Thank you so much, you have no idea how much your visit means to me. Hugs always,

 WakeTheMoon replied on February 07, 2016

Good Morning my TOP OF THE SPOTLIGHT dear friend. I just knew before I even came to check that I would find you there. I will probably not be around much this week. Hersh on another downhill. I know these SL's are only the beginning for you. Enjoy! Hugs 'just me'

 Aspiring_Angel3 replied on February 08, 2016

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