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Feeble Minded

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Author: Nanette
Created: June 23, 2013 at 12:41 pm
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: General/Other | General/Other | General/Other
Entry Stats: 4.5 Stars by 1 users with 2 comments 69 views

Feeble Minded 
Feeble Minded

By Nanette Arrington

Unable to reason with, for they will always be emotionally
unstable. Just like a bomber with a luggage full of explosives,
they always have their own mind view of your motives.

Emotional mental crap, that plucks your last nerve, and leave you as
the one feeling disturbed. They never ask what your thinking, they
simply reach a conclusion, leaving everyone around in complete

They don't deal well socially with others, because they carry and
emotional bliss, people rather stay away from them less and less,
not wanting to get caught up in their feeble minded mess.

A socially weak emotional state, that most normal folk can't even
contemplate. They are weak and lame, never taking the blame,
their mind is feeble, and that's the way it is, though I know it's a

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June 23, 2013

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Interesting write. In the third stanza, I have to wonder if you didn't say the opposite of what you intended. Isn't the idea that people associate with them less and less, not that they stay away from them less and less. To stay away less and less would mean to associate with them more. But maybe I misread it. Elton

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June 23, 2013

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There are so many feeble minded and it shows itself in so very many different ways. Mental defectives come in all walks of life from helicopter parents to the totally insane walking our streets. The arrogant are very good at being feeble minded. Good write

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