A Poem by elphie


Author: elphie
Created: April 06, 2006 at 04:27 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: General/Other | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4.59 Stars by 5 users with 5 comments and 337 views

Music of My Life  

Always with a song in my head
The music is never dead.
Whistling a tune
From night until noon.

A part of my heart
The music lives on.
It takes me to the past
And helps make the moment last.

Moment by moment
Song by song
I remember my past
And sing along.


Last Modified: May 21, 2012 at 07:12 am
© elphie - all rights reserved


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Comments & Reviews



DewmanX4
January 05, 2012
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very cute poem and kinds of makes me think of a kids Nursery rhyme..

So like this piece



(Author)
Thanks my friend. I like that you compared it to kids nursery rhyme . I never thought of it that way.

 elphie replied on January 06, 2012


what came to my mind whenread it

 DewmanX4 replied on January 06, 2012


(Author)
so sweet

 elphie replied on January 06, 2012




ThunderStorm
December 13, 2010
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Excllent
this is excllent work elphie you have done well you are so very special your poems are very thoughtful and brings a piece of the puzzle together as a tight bond of the world this poem it is going for the spotlight



(Author)
Thank you so much for your kind words.

 elphie replied on December 14, 2010




Lovely1Val
April 08, 2006
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aww very good poem
ty for sharing.


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MBishop
April 06, 2006
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what a great write! wonderful flow.


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teenie
April 06, 2006
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i like this poem a lot. keep up with your writing do not ever stop.


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