A Poem by babybbailey


Author: babybbailey
Created: October 24, 2012 at 10:07 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Free Verse | Self Help | Inspirational
Upload Stats: 4.5 Stars by 1 users with 1 comments and 84 views

Welcome  

Let's walk together for a while

And ask where we begin

we will build a place where we can grow and all can enter in,

we will be the hands of accepting

And will love with all our hearts

welcome, welcome to this place
You're invited to come and share this home
All are welcome
through these open doors
'Cause of all of us are welcome here
All are welcome in this place


Last Modified: October 24, 2012 at 10:25 pm
© babybbailey - all rights reserved

Author Notes


This poem was written for all those who feel like they aren't welcome anywhere. It is supposed to be a reminder to these people that there is always a place for them

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DisneyRe-Writer
December 31, 2012
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Awww, this is a lovely piece, babybbailey! I'm surprised it hasn't already been reviewed before me as its sentiment is really sweet and caring. A very tender write.

"we will be the hands of accepting" < My favourite line lol, although, imo, i think the word "accepting" might work better as "acceptance".. i don't know, maybe that's just me being annoying and nitpicky! :-D

Anyways, overall, as i say, a really tender piece. And again, a sentiment that really shows how lovely a writer you are. I love the Author Notes, too.

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