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Author: Basi
Created: April 18, 2012 at 08:16 am
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: Suspense | Spiritual | Weird
Entry Stats: 5 Stars by 1 users with 2 comments 113 views

Is there any chance?? 
it was Friday...
before the Lazarus Saturday...

I was the Last man in that day to Confession room...
Deep Darkness outside..

Only Me and God...
He is ready to hear my voice...

In trembling voice I said... "is there any chance??"

He give a bright smile and said in a smooth voice pointing his hands to the cross
"Up to this!! i loves you.. Be strong and be the light of the world..i am with you" ..





Last Modified: April 18, 2012 at 08:18 am


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Comments & Reviews ( X 1)

GozeelRana
September 30, 2012

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Beautiful. Simple and Deep it is.

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ArtNightshade
April 18, 2012

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Whoa that just blew my mind! Especially the last part, that was my favorite of all. "Be strong and be the light of the world...I am with you".


Basi
May 01, 2012
(Creator)
thanks Art..



 
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