A Poem by Galacticbeam


Author: Galacticbeam
Created: April 03, 2012 at 01:20 am
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Free Verse | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4.5 Stars by 3 users with 3 comments and 202 views

GLIMPSING YOU  

GLIMPSING YOU

Face
Quantum leaping

Iíve seen your
Hyperspatial smile

Lucid dreams
Iíve been here

Once again you
Transude my brain

Hypnotic pulsations
In the quatum foam

And I feel the excitation
In the vacuum

This must be the
Something in the nothing

Such a glimpse
Of you, I convulse


© Galacticbeam - all rights reserved


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Comments & Reviews ( X 3)



GirardMikael
April 03, 2012
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awsome!
just a talent of these days, modern and funny. Keep up the Good work!



(Author)
Thank you. Much appreciated
GB

 Galacticbeam replied on April 03, 2012




HorsieKipling
April 03, 2012
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Admirable
I truly adore your writing, and it is as if I can feel what you as a writer are feeling at the moment you wrote this. Wonderful job, great vocabulary, I admire you

THANK YOU



(Author)
Thanks
GB

 Galacticbeam replied on April 03, 2012




SanExpeditus
April 03, 2012
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Love or Medusa?
Extraordinary! The most intense and immense translation of awe and wonderment, be it in the galaxies, in the gods and heavens or simply in the face of the one you love! A truly impacting poem, my good poet...sl.



(Author)
Thank you for your appreciation and kind words. I knew you would like this one
GB

 Galacticbeam replied on April 03, 2012




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