A Poem by JoanDZombie2RC


Author: JoanDZombie2RC
Created: March 18, 2012 at 01:10 am
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: General/Other | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 5 Stars by 1 users with 2 comments and 170 views

Magnifell  

Oh Magnify oh Magnifell of the magnificent
will you shower me with flowers?

you bring to me all that you do
with out one bit of strife

make it at the end of the world
and not at the end of my life

and in the morning lights the dawn
with a simple prayer

knowing that you will always be
always will be there...


© JoanDZombie2RC - all rights reserved


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michaelgallatin
March 18, 2017
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Extemely interesting...
and actually sounds rather spiritual. I really enjoyed the hopeful, inspirational, caring quality that exists in the wording. I'm not religious myself in the sense of most organized religions but this seems much like a prayer to "God". Very nice and spotlight worthy!

Take care,
Mike
applaud


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smilecookie
May 29, 2012
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Bravo.
Very powerful. Keep up the good work.


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