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Author:   Littlevoice
Created: February 24, 2012 at 03:48 am
Entry Type: Poem, T (13+)
Category: Inspirational | Love | Relationships
Entry Stats: 4.55 Stars by 9 users with 11 comments 835 views

What If 


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Last Modified: October 03, 2013 at 11:27 am


Author Notes
When love and peace is so warm I just do not understand violence

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Comments & Reviews ( X 10)

PoetryDarling
April 05, 2012

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This is a wonderful piece. What if's could go on forever and changing the world into a better place is hard but at least we can try. All we need is faith and hope. We are just humans that live and learn. This is a wonderful poem that I think many people can relate to. Thank you for sharing this with us. Well done. - PD


Littlevoice
April 05, 2012
(Creator)
Thank you for this review always nice to hear from new people glad you enjoyed it. Hope I am in the John Lennon camp lets live in peace. Thanks KS



bellajo
March 28, 2012

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that was very heartfelt


Littlevoice
April 27, 2012
(Creator)
Thank you for your comments KS



terrygodwin
March 28, 2012

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good
Poems with this message make people realise what might have happened if they had thought before acting. A poem short and succent hits a message home hard and clear. This does the job nicely. Well done


Littlevoice
April 27, 2012
(Creator)
Sorry for delay in getting back to thank you for your review KS



AdaInspirations
March 24, 2012

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Beautiful
I love this poem. Well written. What if indeed the whole world was filled with love and peace instead of war and voilence. If it's not in our reality, at least we can dream it.


Littlevoice
March 25, 2012
(Creator)
It is so uplifting to get such a nice review Thank You and it really is meant



snulf
March 20, 2012

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i completely agree,
this is sooo beautiful :]
wonderful, wonderful job keep up the great work,
spotlight <3


Littlevoice
March 20, 2012
(Creator)
It's friends like you that make writing worth while THANK YOU for this review



kitty
March 20, 2012

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We can but dream
This is a senario that most of us contemplate.We are but mere humans with hopes and dreams. Some of us take life more seriously than others hoping for the ideal. Another meaningful piece. Thank you once again.Kitty


Littlevoice
March 20, 2012
(Creator)
Just think that we spend to much time hurting rather than helping the situation, how nice would it be to wave that magic wand



Anushree
March 02, 2012

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i agree with san. beautiful thoughts and a very good sense of writing.


Littlevoice
March 05, 2012
(Creator)
Thank you comments like this encourage us to keep writing



SanExpeditus
February 24, 2012

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You may be 'Littlevoice' but your wonderful message is loud and clear and so encouraging to the human heart, dear poet. When I read it, I feel uplifted, to hear another's plea for peace and harmony, the most beautiful song to be sung. I also like your avatar, it's image evokes a sense of freedom and clarity, a little like Jonathan LIvingston Seagull! Spotlight for a lovely spirit!


Littlevoice
February 24, 2012
(Creator)
I thank you for your review, and although the picture was taken by me it is a pelican. I do feel exactly the same sentiment, the book Johnathan Livingstone Seagull is an amazing book, once again thank you hope you don't mind if I join your fan club


SanExpeditus
February 24, 2012
My dear poet, I would be honoured, thank you. The pelican is a beautiful bird, as with all, they eptiomise the soaring of a soul for me. Thank you for your lovely response.



ekramunnisa
February 24, 2012

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I complete agree with your sentiments.. But i guess its just the way this world is.. If there is good then there will be bad. Beautiful poem..


Littlevoice
March 20, 2012
(Creator)
Thank you for your review



buggles
February 24, 2012

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good
good poem again, if we could all live by your words maybe the world would be a better place to live, but alas I think it will fall on more deaf ears the listeners and that's a shame , another good write you have penned...Eddy


Littlevoice
February 24, 2012
(Creator)
Always good to know friends enjoy a write



ESTERA
February 24, 2012

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this is lovely , a very beautiful poem , thanks very much for sharing this


Littlevoice
February 24, 2012
(Creator)
Thank you for your kind comments, it does give inspiration to continue



 
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