A Poem by Boldpen


Author: Boldpen
Created: February 21, 2012 at 06:52 am
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Tribute | Inspirational | Non Fiction
Upload Stats: 4.94 Stars by 17 users with 17 comments and 328 views

We Write  

While in dreams, standing alone
From nowhere a sudden thinking strikes
Our mind just flatters over the thought
Our soul just chatters and we write

While sunk in our daily jobs
A loud even, silently bites
Our conscience pokes us to act
Our spirit echoes and we write

While filled so deeply full with pain
Walking through cold, damp night
Our Inside mounts a burning shiver
It wants to come out and we write

While feeling the need to be heard
We want to show a guiding light
The views we bare, they want to spread
We want to share and we write

Dipped in the ink of emotions
Skates the pen of heart on sheet
Drowned in feelings, our fingers
Strike the keyboard with joyful beat

We write about the unseen dreams
Rising up like a skyscraper
We write about our mother nature
Bringing her beauty on a paper

We write and create wonderlands
Their own ballads, the animals sing
Fabulous unicorns, Fairies, dragons
Content beggar and greedy king

We twist, turn and spin them up
We hunt for every single chance
In every statement we breathe life
Making every word, hum and dance

We write and sow the seed of hope
Give some tears, grant some smiles
We add adventure, mix the thrill
We make possible the things futile

We cut a part of our own self
In our quotes, that we hide
We mend, amend, we give it all
We give our readers the best ride

In the end, we give a sigh
After creation of a piece cease
A sigh of praise and delight
At sight of our masterpiece.


© Boldpen - all rights reserved

Author Notes


Now.. This Is just a try.. A little tribute for all the writers across the globe.... I know.. grammar might have faults.. I'd love if you people help me out...
VIVA WRITERS!

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Comments & Reviews ( X 7)



AndStuff
October 06, 2012
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So awesome!
This is so awesome! It's so easy to relate to for any writer I'm sure. You did a great job at showing the beautiful side of writing!


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Azrielle
June 10, 2012
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reflective
all writers relate to these powerful impressive lines .. reflective lines luv..


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kitty
May 29, 2012
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Striving for perfection
You are almost there! Analysed us writers (including yourself) summed us up beautifully. Liked the way you wrote ...' dippoed in the ink of emotions...'.It's the critique that matters. Best done privately if its bad! Appraisal on good work nice done publicly


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elphie
May 10, 2012
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Love it. It is truly amazing how we are all connected by that common thread.


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lovestory1
April 26, 2012
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Very wonderful indeed. Thank you for sharing and keep on writing! - LS1


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kdstorm73
March 06, 2012
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You have hit on most of the reasons I write. Great job. Loved the poem.


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seraph1420
February 26, 2012
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perfect!
perfect as in words, perfect as in thoughts, perfect as in structure and yes "perfect as in grammar too!".
it was, seriously, amazing! i loved it to be honest. every situation has been described beautifully. it was definitely worth reading, not once, not twice, but, a million times!


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TealWind
February 23, 2012
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Amazing!
I love this poem with all my heart! Love your poems A LOT! <3


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user27485
February 23, 2012
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Awesome!! Word for word this is simply brilliant.


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jamx15
February 23, 2012
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This poem is a steak!
This is amazing. Five stars all the way. To be the one to share the insight of a writer and the emotion we express is awesomely done! I enjoyed this very much and thank you for sharing. It was well done


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philip19
February 22, 2012
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bravo.
Excellent expression of writing, thoughts that meander are brought to the surface of ones mind and pen is put to paper-bravo-philip sl


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DemeraraLady
February 22, 2012
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beautiful
at the age of 15 i must say that you are becoming a brillant writer..
love this piece keep on writing..


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snulf
February 22, 2012
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this is great!
i love this,
wonderful job
keep up the good work! c:


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emeraldeyes
February 21, 2012
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Well done
Nicely done. I like the thoughts. It captures the many moods that draws one to write. I would have liked to see you continue the final phrase "and we write" to the end of each stanza for consistancy. Other than that, I liked it. ee


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KT8126
February 21, 2012
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Perfect Picture!
I love this so much! It explains exactly how you feel when you write, and this poem shows great emotion. This poems defiently deserves to be on spotlight. Keep writing.


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JAZZY
February 21, 2012
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EXCELLENT !
THIS IS ONE OF THE BEST I HAVE READ HERE .. YOU ARE A TALENT INDEED ... I AM SURE IN YEARS TO COME YOU WILL BE PUBLISHED ... YOUR WORDS HAVE STRUCK A CHORD IN MY SOUL OF SOULS ... AND I THAT YOU "MOST BEAUTIFUL POET" .......

EXCELLENT WRITE .. FAVORITE LINE .... Dipped in the ink of emotions
Skates the pen of heart on sheet .... WELL SAID ................. JAZZY



MISTAKE IN TYPING .. MEANT TO WRITE YOU ARE A "MOST BEAUTIFUL POET" ..............

 JAZZY replied on February 21, 2012


(Author)
Thank you, Friend.
This means a lot to me... thank you for those encouraging words.

 Boldpen replied on February 21, 2012


YOU ARE MOST WELCOME !

 JAZZY replied on February 21, 2012




RavenStar
February 21, 2012
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fantastical!
awesome! my fav line had to be "dipped in the ink of emotions'
very insparational!


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