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Betterdays - Newest complete song

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Author: tomdavis
Created: February 19, 2012 at 12:43 pm
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: Love | Lyrics | Personal
Entry Stats: 5 Stars by 1 users with 1 comments 125 views

Betterdays - Newest complete song 

so the story begins with a harsh reality
hard times to come so a change in mentality
I try recover the norm back in normality
another one of those days of a life formality
becomeing the reason being unexplained
thoughts driven insitions corckscrewd my brain
leaving just enough for me to stay saine and maintain
so i just look back at the picture left here in a empty frame

thinking bout the better days
i think about it all the time
i think about it as i sing i think about it as i rhyme
i think about the here and now
i think about what to say
think about the better days hoping more will come my way

so even they wouldnt dont mean that i couldnt
dont mean what i see be the real end to me
so even its its unreal and its summing you dont feel
dont mean that the book is closed and my heart you gotta steal
id hope youd understand that this love i feel be true
i demonstrate in what i say and the things that i do
it appears in the mist all phazzed out in line
it appears if im honest ive already missed the sign
you must think im a joke or clinickly insane
but the thort of you is the hardest thing to remove from my brain
cuz id walked a thousand miles just to see your thousand smiles
id cry a thousand tears just to clear your thousand fears
id cry you a river and id send you a rose
protect you from the darkness and all that it expose
time is of the essence and it flys on bye so fast
just to see your face again that same face from the past
this love has held onto me tightly and burrowed deep within my heart
i gave away my precious gift and you owned it from the start
never met some one like you whos beautifull and smart
someone i never thought i couldnt bare to be apart

thinking bout the better days
i think about it all the time
i think about it as i sing i think about it as i rhyme
i think about the here and now
i think about what to say
think about the better days hoping more will come my way

one morning when i woke, never thought that it could be
but i see you lying there, naked side bye side to me.
first glimmer was wish, seccond thought was dream.
couldnt belive my eyes or belive of what i had seen.
a sudden rush of hope ,finaly had i found the door
after all the ones id opend i was right this time for sure.
girl, dont rain on me in my dieing hour,
as i look up at the strars embrace the heavens shower.
your my blooming flower.
beauty thats so rare, fills a man with the power.
keeps me going strong when the times are turning sour.
she be my light from in the sky. the reason i keep going, all reason that i try.
im an honest kind guy who listens to how you feal.
an honest kind guy who isnt fake no i am real
id love to walk on the beach holding your hand
im not affraid to take the lead and tell you where i stand
i just want someone who's love, together i can share
a special individual to show some extra care
suprise you with gifts and make you smile when feeling blue
just know that if you fall i am always ready to catch you.

thinking bout the better days
i think about it all the time
i think about it as i sing i think about it as i rhyme
i think about the here and now
i think about what to say
think about the better days hoping more will come my way

i use to think that darkness followed,
where ever i would go.
Untill one day an angel fell
radiated with a glow
suddenly i felt vibrant,
reborn in new light,
Astonished by her beauty
that shone through the night.
consistantly she paces,
what is she looking for.
hesitant but arm extended,
she reaches for the door,
i wounder what she is searching for
what she seeks to explore.
gazing into her eyes as she turns with pace,
my heart kicked into gear and so begins my chase.

thinking bout the better days
i think about it all the time
i think about it as i sing i think about it as i rhyme
i think about the here and now
i think about what to say
think about the better days hoping more will come my way

thinking bout the better days
i think about it all the time
i think about it as i sing i think about it as i rhyme
i think about the here and now
i think about what to say
think about the better days hoping more will come my way


approx 4 and a half mins long.


Author Notes
this is my 2nd complete song. but my first one that didnt envolve blood guts death and violance so im proud. hope you enjoy. this took alot out of me so i hope you all like. Im hoping to make a beat to this and finalise it on reccord. read more of my work please


 

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Comments & Reviews

DaughterofVampyr
April 22, 2012

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A really great piece. I can hear it my head, singing it out loud, and inciting some chords through my fingertips.
Love and lust and heartbreak and beauty... what a concoction. You've written a real talented piece of music - i'd love to hear it on track.
A fan,
DaughterofVampyr.
Let the night scream "Murder" tonight..

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