A Poem by sierraquinn19


Author: sierraquinn19
Created: February 15, 2012 at 10:37 am
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Relationships | Love | Sad
Upload Stats: 4.83 Stars by 3 users with 3 comments and 167 views

Love  

Love

My eyes start to hurt

I can't breathe

I'm thinking of only him

It kills me when he's around others

This state of mind I'm in..

Why? Why must you be so harsh?

I helped you through everything

and you ignore me?

I feel nothing.


© sierraquinn19 - all rights reserved

Author Notes


I wrote this for a Poetry Contest c:

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user26535
April 14, 2012
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you discribe it so well and then the emptiness and love is blind well done


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Dancer26
March 25, 2012
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Wow, this was really good and so sad. I enjoyed this a lot. You described the perfect feelings of being forgotten about but still loving them. Keep up the good work.

~Dancer


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Dancer26
March 25, 2012
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Wow, this was really good and so sad. I enjoyed this a lot. You described the perfect feelings of being forgotten about but still loving them. Keep up the good work.

~Dancer


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