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Author: Batch
Created: February 08, 2012 at 11:38 pm
Entry Type: Music, M (16+)
Category: Lyrics | Heartbreak | Psychology
Entry Stats: 5 Stars by 1 users with 1 comments 105 views

Analyst 
You wern't there to see me off when I left

So I thought I'd bid you a final fairwell, so fairwell

And I replay it in my mind everyday

And wonder why it had to end this way,

But I'm better of this way

I've been though some drama and bullshit

And I have fallen into my own despair

I thought you'd care...



Baby, baby,

There is something wrong with me

And I so badly want to be happy

But I'm afraid I'll never be



Into the darkness I will fade

I'd hate to rain on your parade, goodbye Adelaide

It would be wrong if I should stay

And let you continue to treat me this way

So this is why I say...



Baby, baby,

There is something wrong with me

And I so badly want to be happy

But I'm afraid I'll never be



Undiagnosed, analyst

Pulling myself apart

Undiagnosed, analyst

Pulling myself apart



Baby, baby,

There is something wrong with me

And I so badly want to be happy

But I'm afraid I'll never be



Baby, baby,

There is something wrong with me

But theres someone else I got to be

And then i'll be happy



Undiagnosed, analyst

Pulling myself apart

Undiagnosed, analyst

I keep tearing myself apart...


Last Modified: February 08, 2012 at 11:41 pm


Author Notes
I have just recently gone through another break up, with the same girl for the second time. This is my final goodbye. Since leaving her I have been diagnosed with depression and I am currently on Anti Depression pills


 

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Huda
March 21, 2012

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