A Poem by jonha16


Author: jonha16
Created: February 23, 2006 at 10:37 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Love | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4 Stars by 3 users with 3 comments and 199 views

Crying Heart  

My life has always been this lonely,
My heart has always been deprived of love.
Even if I try not to think...
How cruel life has been to me
Even if I try to love unconditionally
My heart is crying to be loved back
My life is screaming for happiness,
Though I want to give my everything.
Make myself believe that I am alright
I still can't escape the fact
That my life is totally lifeless
My heart is drowning in tears
Because you're not loving me back...


© jonha16 - all rights reserved


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ChorumAresus
January 29, 2008
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It has the possibility of being a perfect poem, just needs to be refined.


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sgking123
February 24, 2006
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It is so very good.Kudos


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Wombat10
February 23, 2006
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Very sad. A wonderful write.


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