Creative Writing Community | 177 Writers Online

Home

My Account

Add Writing

read write review classics spotlight forum store

Should I Stay or Should I Go

Last 100 Poems/Stories/Columns:

Author: nameless

Created: February 05, 2012 at 07:58 pm

Entry Type: Poem, G (All)

Category: Relationships | General/Other | General/Other

Entry Stats: 4.5 Stars by 1 users with 1 comments 88 views

Should I Stay or Should I Go

I can never tell with you,
if you are right or wrong,
if you are good or bad,
if you are the one.

I don't know,
what to believe,
I don't want to lose myself
but I don't want you to leave.

If I trust you today
I admit I'm terrified
you will crush me tomorrow
and laugh at what you left behind.

I could turn and walk away
never feel this again
hard as it would be,
is it better in the end?

Or is there some way,
you could love me after all
we could be together
rare, real, and free of cost.

Author Notes

So don't know if i should take the chance on someone, or if it will just break my heart. hmm.

→ Critical Reviews Preferred

The author would love to hear your feedback but you must be logged in to do that. If you are a member of Writers-Network click here to login and review this writing entry.

Not a member? Not a problem! You can register here, it's free for everyone

Comments & Reviews

SonofVampyr
February 05, 2012

Helpful:

It's sweet

You have a sweet way with words. Don't worry, you'll know whose the one soon enough

Additional Comments (0)

There are no comments on this review.

Sponsored: Archia
Writing Site Login


	ChrisDuntsch 16 Writing Entries
	madchandler 85 Writing Entries
	bianca 36 Writing Entries
	HowesUK 12 Writing Entries
	DavyE 191 Writing Entries
	Littlevoice 41 Writing Entries
	welcome 184 Writing Entries
	Daychavue 14 Writing Entries

Yobtar

2.	Vashthestampede0

3.	Rave-poetgirl

4.	a112yearoldman

richom

6.	bickerstaffe

emofishy

failte

kitty

10.	Weirdme101

Questions, Comments? Contact for help with this poetry website

Authors, Share Your Book with Millions of Readers

Writing By Genre

View All

Love Poems	Abuse Poems	Contemporary	Suspense Stories
Dark Poetry	Death Poems	Inspirational	Fiction Stories
Sad Poems	Haiku Poetry	Fan-Fiction Stories	How-To Guides
Horror Stories	Parenting	Philosophy	Romance
Addiction Poems	Relationships	Tribute Poems	Lyrics & Songs

» Sponsored Writing Ads By Members	Create An Ad
• Archia • How Does it Feel?

Poetry Site Quick Links

Newest Writing	Find a Member	Sponsored Writing	Poetry Glossary
Writing Contests	PRO Members	Self-Promoted	Writing By Genre
Writing Prompts	Upgrade to PRO	Spotlight Writing	View FAQ's
Search Writing	Site News	Famous Poetry	Contact Us

Share your love poems and inspirational poems in our creative writing community. This site for published poems is free for all writers.
Post unlimited poems and stories plus get access to our free poetry contests, writing forums, writing prompts, famous poetry & more
Poetry Site | Read Poems | Publish Poetry | Writing Forums | Free Writing Community | Creative Writing