A Poem by silverwings


Author: silverwings
Created: May 05, 2011 at 07:48 am
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Sad | Despair | Sad
Upload Stats: 5 Stars by 7 users with 8 comments and 346 views

The Fog  


I walk in a fog, wandering the halls,
a ghost in the making out of the walls.
Unable to think, mind in a haze;
not sure how to get out of the maze.

Heart feels so low, barely a beat,
feeling so lost no friends now to meet.
How do you wipe the fog from your eyes?
Life moves without you, as tears slowly cry.

5/5/11


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Comments & Reviews ( X 16)



Desmond
June 01, 2011
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The hours and then the days seem to slip away, as the feelings of isolation increase.
Like a ghost appearing and then disappearing, in a world all on its own.
You have so clearly expressed the fog of depression, that lingers and stains the heart and soul.
May this day - be better than the one before - take care.



(Author)
Hey Des...what can I say...you know me too well....sorry again for the late reply...I really need to get on here more often!!!
Take care and catch up soon...
haven't had your words of wisdom for a while...
Luv
Jules

 silverwings replied on November 04, 2011




kntinaz
May 08, 2011
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Wonderful way of portraying feelings and thoughts. It spoke to me reminders of life's moments that slip past us...especially when were in a fog...Thank you for sharing and keep up the great work..Tony



(Author)
Hey Tony...sorry for the late reply but haven't been on here for a while...needed a much earned break...I hope all is well with you my friend
Luv
Jules

 silverwings replied on November 04, 2011




OhdarlingIwis
May 06, 2011
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beautiful!
This is beautiful! It really got to my heart dear friend, brilliant write! I enjoyed reading it. Nice onee!

Keep writing sweetie,
~Ohdarling<3 <3



(Author)
Hey Ohdarlinglwis...sorry for the late reply but haven't been on WN for a while...thank you for your kind comments
Luv
Jules

 silverwings replied on November 04, 2011




BrokenWriter
May 06, 2011
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nice.
Ohhh, this is really good.

-BrokenWriter =)



(Author)
Hey BrokenWriter...thank you for you kind comments...sorry its taken so long to reply but been away from WN for a while...
Take Care
Luv
Jules

 silverwings replied on November 04, 2011




scousa1
May 06, 2011
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hi julie, THE FOG WILL LIFT BABY it always does...spotlight worthy here. short and bittersweet...great job my friens....joe.i would give you loads of points but as normal havnt got any ha,ha,ha,,,,



(Author)
Hey Joe...I think the fog is finally lifting and I can now start to see the trees...taken a few shake ups but I am still around to tell the story and that is the main thing...thanks buddy..Jules...

 silverwings replied on May 06, 2011




elfqueena
May 05, 2011
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awe jules you touched my heartstrings once more, with your lovely sad writings , and i feel from it the pain and suffering one goes though , as i have them days lso . but to live with it daily is such a struggle , i know as just to live with it every week or so is , can imagine what it must be like..... you made us feel some of the frustration and agony coming from depression and heart break also . love this and is sl worthy , hugs dear friend ,chin up



(Author)
Hey Shaz...thankyou so much...yes some days it is a struggle but others are kind... i just need to keep focused baby and I'll be fine...I think I do get very frustrated and to a degree paranoid as I feel that although people say they understand they do not...many do not know what it is like to plan your own finish to life...many say they understand but it is different to actually go through things to fulfil a plan you really don't want to go through but feel there is no way out...that is the agony half the time as it not something you simply can understand...you need to know how it feels to understand...how shattered your heart is that you are more than depressed...you are so far into the hole that you can not see any way out...many just say cheer up and move on...but there is no way you can when you are buried so deep...you need to slowly dig your way out and hope with all your might the plan stays on hold in the mean time...very deep I know but I suppose it is how I feel at times and the constant frustrations I endure due to lack of understanding...I am getting there though Shaz...and I know I will....I just need to have faith in myself....take care and keep well...thank you my love...Jules...

 silverwings replied on May 06, 2011


your so true , my daughter is one of those who think you canshug it off nd go on with life, when in fact its so hard to see the future when the hope has flown , I trust me know how you feel as I am in the throws of fighting it right now, and it helps to know that I alone am not alone in this that someone else needs support I can give, People tend to think we are weak, and maybe we are but it takes strenght to fight this and carry on with a life where hope is fading before the onset of such dispair, but we must and will prevail sweetie ,have to live is to good to waste it isnt it ,love to you Sharon

 elfqueena replied on May 06, 2011




Caroline
May 05, 2011
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Brilliant!!!!!!
This is pure brilliance and oh so spotlight worthy. This spoke directly to my heart. Keep that pen flowing forever, your friend, bw



(Author)
Hey BW...Thankyou for your lovely comment...I am trying with such will to write that positive poem...I have decided it just isn't me...maybe I should have been a goth...lol...Jules...

 silverwings replied on May 05, 2011


you just go right ahead and write what comes to your heart and we will enjoy it here on wn!! take care and happy writing, BW

 Caroline replied on May 05, 2011


(Author)
thanks...I think I'd be a good goth writer though...certainly have the making hey...lol...

 silverwings replied on May 06, 2011




BellaDonaLea
May 05, 2011
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This tugged at my heart and emotions. This is a wonderful piece.
You don't know how much this write reaches me. For I feel like this and am having trouble finding my way to the fresh air. Thank you for this great poem. I really enjoyed it. ~ Dona



(Author)
Hey Dona...yes I know the feeling...I hope all is ok...will have to catch up on FB...haven't been on lately but write me a message if you would like to talk...loved your write in the Sl...sensational really...but it did make me wonder???..Thanks for the review..Jules...

 silverwings replied on May 05, 2011




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