A Poem by lisashef


Author: lisashef
Created: April 28, 2011 at 09:32 am
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: General/Other | Sad | Relationships
Upload Stats: 5 Stars by 4 users with 5 comments and 233 views

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You threw me away, easy to replace
Incapable of love, I did not want to face
I looked through your flaws & made up my mind
The person I needed, so desperate to find

Been trying to deal with the harshness of you
The rages and judgment and still I pursue
Why does my heart, refuse to release
Despite what is needed to find inner peace

Like two different people, I waited and waited
Hoping that day, it was not me that you hated
You don’t even know me, your view black and white
The perceptions you have, are simply not right

I am not a selfish person, not always to blame
It seemed you rejoiced in all of my pain
This test that I failed but never knew I had taken
The person I trusted, so badly mistaken

You walk away thinking that I am to blame
The long stream of people that fall like the rain
One person leaves, another to follow
The truth that is you,….bitter and hollow


Refusing to face what I already know
I am sure it is time, to finally let go…………



Last Modified: May 26, 2011 at 06:58 pm
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Comments & Reviews ( X 6)



philip19
July 20, 2011
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good write
Very good flow and rhyme about someone who let you down badly-we've all been there-mistaken the signals for friendship and attraction-only to discover to our cost-
that we were mistaken-good write--philip.


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TimTheScarecrow
May 29, 2011
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i feel like i am you. which is very good for you to have created that feeling, since im quite sure we are different people.
your emotions truly do speak in your poetry. i hope to read more from you



(Author)
Thank you! I appreciate it

 lisashef replied on May 29, 2011




patrickmurray
April 28, 2011
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bye later
To bad you are not forgiving sometimes saying things is all the persom can do,better than being violent.Some times you push na person som far they say bad things because your actoins hurt them,think about it.



(Author)
People can make you feel a certain way but ultimately we are all responsible for our own actions. Violence is never justified as far as Im concerned. Apologies mean nothing if they are not followed with positive actions.

 lisashef replied on April 28, 2011




SanExpeditus
April 28, 2011
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Excellent
A wonderful piece of poetry, perfectly formed and straining with emotions. Well done and thank you for sharing it.



(Author)
Thanks so much!

 lisashef replied on April 28, 2011




Bassoonia
April 28, 2011
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Your word choice makes each word sting the heart, which is a great task to accomplish. Kudos for that, my friend.

Keep writing!



(Author)
I appreciate your kind words!

 lisashef replied on April 28, 2011




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