A Poem by Nidhi


Author: Nidhi
Created: March 11, 2011 at 05:31 am
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Dark | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4.75 Stars by 2 users with 2 comments and 193 views

A mirage called life  

Life, a hazy mirage seized by some poignant,
some worthy junctures, mostly haunting.
A silhouette embedded in a rock it seems,
fossiled in time; lifeless, yet it's life still.
So calm, yet clamoring to be lived,
to taste all the lessons which it can give.
Sometimes an angel, showering affection,
even a devil at times, seething hate and deception.
Like a broken tap on a deserted highway.
No water, yet a nomad, tired & wet
checks it & returns betrayed.
Yes, its exudes enigma,
an elusive mystery, hard to decipher
Those who fathom are unforgiven throughout.
It's enchanting, yes this life,
like a glowing ball of fire.
shelled by love, hate and redemption,
a temptress in a sultry attire.
But, it is doomed to die one day
& will take with it all it's prey.
This life, overwhelmed with miseries,
ready to entrap our souls.
We endure just to gather memories,
a heaven within empty wholes.
We exist to find ourselves,
to take all that it can give.
We laugh, we cry, we curse,
yet we never cringe to live.


© Nidhi - all rights reserved

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kntinaz
March 12, 2011
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""""Yet we never cringe to live"""""" loved the journey, pulls you into and takes you along.



(Author)
Thanks a lot :-) Glad you liked it.

 Nidhi replied on March 13, 2011




lalipenz
March 11, 2011
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An interpretation of life from within a life very well done Nidhi . I liked this very much.
At least the language scape of your write does suggest you take care with your words chosen spotlight



(Author)
Thanks dear!

 Nidhi replied on March 11, 2011


u r welcome doll

 lalipenz replied on March 11, 2011




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