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Woman's Day gone- A tribute to Women

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Author: lalipenz
Created: March 10, 2011 at 04:47 am
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: Contemporary | General/Other | Tribute
Entry Stats: 5 Stars by 4 users with 6 comments 1695 views

Woman's Day gone- A tribute to Women 
We wonder who you are
Once or may be twice
May be many times over
And wait till you are
nestled in our arms
Sweet talking you to love

Dreaming mountains and rivers
Arranging flowers for today
Yet tomorrow,a hard fist

Gut wrenching leaves you
On the platform of reality
Never a thanks for being mother, wife
Eternal server, eternal sufferer

by Nikhil Nath


Author Notes
Say anything this is a tribute to women hope my women friends here like this you may choose to bash me if you feel

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Comments & Reviews ( X 6)

BellaDonaLea
March 12, 2011

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lovely tribute
This is a wonderful write. Woman will love how you acknowledge all we try to do in the lifes we live. Such a poetic heart you have my sir lalipenz. Thank you for sharing this.


lalipenz
March 14, 2011
(Creator)
thank you for liking this it was for all you women who write here and all outside



Synchro
March 10, 2011

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this one made me think
A nd new thoughts are always welcome! Thanks bunch!


lalipenz
March 11, 2011
(Creator)
thank you so much for your comments



jediallday
March 10, 2011

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lovely tribute
A lovely trubute with a bit of a two edged sword in there "Yet tomorrow,a hard fist" very thoughtful and well communicated. Food for thought about the way some women are treated on a daily basis. Yes, we should all honour our women; ou mothers, our wives, our partners, our sisters and our daughters.


lalipenz
March 11, 2011
(Creator)
thank you Paul thank you so much



lyrycsyntyme
March 10, 2011

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It's cool, though i'd like to see a tribute to men, too. I think one of the key steps for women towards equality is actually the end of many specialized womens groups(outside of protesting for equal rights, of course) and holidays. Same thing for national minorities. Why should women, or any minority, have one day, two days, or a month out of a year when the whole year is equally theirs.


lalipenz
March 10, 2011
(Creator)
That is precisely why this poem has been written thank you for reviewing



SecretDrew
March 10, 2011

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This says a lot, I know many a woman like this. A great tribute and it flowed wonderfully. Well done on this exceptional write


lalipenz
March 10, 2011
(Creator)
thank you o light of yugoslavia you made my day i feel truly gratified

SecretDrew
March 10, 2011
Glad to be of use


lalipenz
March 10, 2011
(Creator)



Lillylilly
March 10, 2011

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Affection~
Hi~
I really loved this poem by you~
First of all I must say thank you to remember this day as a great man.
I really loved this heart and mind ~
Bravo my dear ~
Women & men need to each other .God created this feeling so God gave a big gift to human too. That is love.
Men & women with love join to each other.
Thank you so much again.i enjoyed
happy Woman's Day to all of women & men in the world ~
My personal idea~


lalipenz
March 10, 2011
(Creator)
Oh Lilly you gladden my heart all the time thank you for the touching review I thought I should write this because Women's day came and went by and no one here uttered a word about it here at WN thank you again"

Lillylilly
March 10, 2011
yes , you are right ~thank you so much my dear again


lalipenz
March 10, 2011
(Creator)
new poem born to salt posted
won't you write something today?

Lillylilly
March 10, 2011
i try do it , may be later ~but now no



 
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