A Poem by KairiFrostxx


Author: KairiFrostxx
Created: February 10, 2011 at 11:32 am
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Fantasy | Love | Mystery & Crime
Upload Stats: 4.75 Stars by 4 users with 4 comments and 190 views

The Window Sitter  

We sit their for hours every day,
We make eachother laugh by things we say,
Hes always there day and night,
Here for me in a midnight fright,
He sits by my window watching me sleep,
He gave me a locket that i can keep,
One day he sighed and looked outside,
I gazed at him as he sat and cried,
Whats the matter ben why so sad,
He sat and smirked,
because ive done something bad,
I took his hand as he looked at me,
whatever you have done won't bother me,
He looked away and let go of my hand,
Well you remember that big rubber band,
I laughed and relpied yes indeed i do,
He put his back against the window and said with soft words,
i took that rubber band and murdered you,
I felt my heart stop but was it my heart i felt,
I fell to the floor and on my knees i nelt,
your'e lying to me ill prove you wrong you'll see!,
I rand ownstairs to see with disabief,
A crowd of people,
The sound of chattering teeth,
I ran up to my mother and whispered in her ear,
Don't worry mum i'm still here,
She sat and cried holding my photo in her arms,
i ran upstairs,
how long has it been since i passed away,
He sat with his head in his hands,
Dearnt i say,
I dont care now the damage is done,
i want to know how long ago this was done,
Three years it's been but you dont understand,
I'm a spirit, i love you so much,
and to know we could never be,
you dont know how much that hurt me,
Iv'e heard enough! i snapped with anger,
Then ran and embrased him,
Don't worry it's ok,
I love you too in every way,
He put his arms round me head on my shoulder,
You do realise we never grow older,
Well thats fine by me i dont mind,
i get to keep you the way i remember.
Three years ago we were just friends,
but were now together as our love never ends.


© KairiFrostxx - all rights reserved

Author Notes


i just thought of this randomly out of boredom, hope you enjoy it!!!

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Comments & Reviews ( X 4)



bickerstaffe
June 17, 2015
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remarkable!
Beautifully written with a gentle cadence, nifty rhyming, cool imagery and superb story telling. I enjoyed this very much. Thanks for sharing... Best wishes, Keith
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lalipenz
February 11, 2011
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4.5
A nice poem of reminiscence I liked this good job



(Author)
thankyou

 KairiFrostxx replied on February 12, 2011


u r welcome

 lalipenz replied on February 14, 2011




Hunia
February 10, 2011
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effing awesome
this is effng awesome... it has a few grammericalerrors but uther than that great job



(Author)
thankyouu ive been told abput that... my friend bless her shes only 9 and she tried to type it up for me

 KairiFrostxx replied on February 10, 2011




ibuliu
February 10, 2011
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excellent
very good write a few typos you might want to proof read one more time i really enjoyed thx 4 sharing

IBULIU



(Author)
thankyou and i will read it through again

 KairiFrostxx replied on February 10, 2011




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