A Poem by emeraldeyes


Author: emeraldeyes
Created: January 15, 2011 at 10:34 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Tribute | General/Other | General/Other
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HAPPY BIRTHDAY BEST FRIEND

HAPPY BIRTHDAY BEST FRIEND

How can I be so sad today?
After all, it's your birthday.
Please know that you are loved,
Possibly more than I should.
Yesterday's dreams still abide.
Better that I stay away,
Irreversible damage could be done.
Rules and regulations save the day.
Try as I might to ignore these feelings.
Harbors cradle turbulent storms.
Demand a path so straight.
All of creation breaths light and life.
Yearning for the passion to grow
Believe in the power of self control.
Every day draws words to express.
Savory or sweet portions partake.
Traverse the paths toward your happiness.
Friends who care are few to count.
Remember them in your prayers.
In daylight smiles are all about.
End of day is time for tears.
New year's breath to be exhaled.
Day to celebrate another wonderful year!!!


Last Modified: January 15, 2011 at 10:35 pm
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Author Notes






. . . . It's an acrostic


 
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Comments & Reviews



Dancer26
January 17, 2011
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Wow
This is amazing you did a gooodd job! I like the acrostic idea, I haven't seen it on here before. Keep up the good work.

~Ta'Shandra



(Author)
Thank you so much for your kind words and the SL. . . wow! ee

 emeraldeyes replied on January 17, 2011




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