A Limerick by emeraldeyes


Author: emeraldeyes
Created: October 21, 2010 at 09:54 pm
Upload Type: Limerick, G (All)  
Category: Limerick | Sports & Fitness | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4.5 Stars by 1 users with 2 comments and 3186 views

BASEBALL * Limerick  


BASEBALL * Limericks


WATCHING THE BATTER BAT
WONDERING WHERE THE BALL'S AT
STRIKE THE UMP CALLS
HE SCRATCHES HIS BALLS
THEN HE SCRATCHES WHERE HE SAT

THE PITCHER SPITS AND THEN THROWS
THE THROW COUNT THE CATCHER KNOWS
THE UMP CALLS A FOUL
THE BATTER STARTS TO GROWL
THE NEXT FOUL HITS THE UMP IN THE NOSE



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Uranusisfunny
October 03, 2011
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funny
good write : )


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EltonCamp
October 21, 2010
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A fun limerick and you have the rhyme scheme and number of syllables correct. That's very hard for me to do, especially the syllables. But I think limericks are such fun. Thanks for sharing with us. Elton



(Author)
Thank you EC. . . it's always a pleasure to hear from you. Limericks are not easy. It takes a musical ear I think to get the right meter. Don't be afraid to try it. ee

 emeraldeyes replied on October 22, 2010



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