A Poem by oanie1


Author: oanie1
Created: September 10, 2010 at 08:38 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Romance | Love | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4 Stars by 1 users with 1 comments and 163 views

Battered Buttercup  

Your tongue filled, heavy whispering
Iím heady
Feeling like I could slip away on your cool breath into nothingness
Loving when you look at me in that tone Ė
pupils with fingers that tie my shoelaces in knots
Iíve become a tasty victim of your crooked smile
a beaten and battered buttercup


© oanie1 - all rights reserved


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marluvstom
September 10, 2010
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That was good. I really like it. It was thoughtful and I liked the images used. Very vivid.


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