A Poem by SmileLikeYouMean


Author: SmileLikeYouMean
Created: May 16, 2010 at 01:47 pm
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Relationships | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 5 Stars by 2 users with 3 comments and 230 views

Just a lie.  

Theres so many lies in our relationship,
I really dont know what is true,
You could look up "lie" in the dictionary,
And it'd say "me and you".

You dont know how much im hurting,
You dont know how sad i feel,
Because now we both know,
Our relationship was never real.

Relationships are built on trust,
On eachother we should depend,
But now its obvious we can't do that,
So this is now the end.

I told you i love you so many times,
But now i ask myself why,
I got twisted in your little games,
It was always just a lie.


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Author Notes


Popped into my head


 
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ssaawari
May 21, 2010
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it's fact
this is the real thing in ppl's evryday breaking relatioships
u caught it right!!!!
its very well moulded in words


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jmichelle
May 16, 2010
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I can relate so much to this poem that its not even funny. And even though its so true alot of relationships are not built on trust but lies.
~J~


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cluckyduck78
May 16, 2010
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excellent
i reallly enjoyed this poem it express our fallible natures to lie even to ourselves when we are in love,good work


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