A Poem by dreamer


Author: dreamer
Created: May 10, 2010 at 03:11 am
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Romance | Love | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4.33 Stars by 3 users with 4 comments and 240 views

Someday  

Someday Id like to be with you
Forever by your side.
And someday be a part of you
And tell the world youre mine.

Someday Id like to hold you close
And cherish you for my own.
And someday take you in my arms
Where we would be alone.

Someday Id like to take a walk
With you there next to me.
And someday we can be the way
We always dreamed we would be.

Someday, I hope, will come real soon
But it seems so far away.
When that day comes, then we will see
That well never again have to say:
~someday

2007 cac


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Comments & Reviews ( X 2)



Aston
September 25, 2010
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a longing and romantic poem. i love it. there's so much emotion in this love that it brings a whole new view to relationships similar to "Romeo and Juliet'



(Author)
Thank you! I appreciate your review

 dreamer replied on September 28, 2010




eliza
August 28, 2010
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well written
such a hopelessly romantic piece ..very well written...eliza



(Author)
Thank you so much, eliza, for taking the time to review this! I truly appreciate your comments

 dreamer replied on August 28, 2010




emeraldeyes
May 26, 2010
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Beautiful
The longing in this poem tugs at my tummy. It's really well done.



(Author)
Thank you so much for your review! I appreciate it very much

 dreamer replied on May 26, 2010




daughterofagoth
May 10, 2010
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Cute poem, I really liked it. Well written my friend.



(Author)
Thank you! The poems in this particular folder were all written over 30 years ago...so now I am trying to get back into it and write from my heart now. Hopefully there will be more to come!

 dreamer replied on May 10, 2010




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