A Poem by andycapped


Author: andycapped
Created: May 09, 2010 at 09:36 am
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Dark | Spiritual | Death
Upload Stats: 4.75 Stars by 4 users with 5 comments and 329 views

" DREAMS OF SOMBER "  

Night shock.!!!
Unconscious , soul and mind unblocked.
Demonic head rush.
Malevolent dreams crush.
Conscience lost all trust.
Chained and mind tortured ,finished off by lust.
Mind raped ,then filled with total disgust.
Demons begin to dance in my head.
Their razor-like wings,cut and shred.
Urine and feces all over the bed.
Pungent stench,from vomit, the demons are being fed,
As I swallow my tongue, my eyes turn red.
I just can't take this horror, my mind is bleed.
Please no more dreams of somber,my mind is already dead. By, A*C*


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Comments & Reviews ( X 3)



BellaDonaLea
April 03, 2011
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WOW
I really like this! It flows very well and I love the imagery. I think the title says it all, but I visualize and its very dark and a little scary. Another great piece my dear! Thank you for sharing. ~ Dona


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Hannah92
May 14, 2010
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Nice
I usually have a hard time liking dark poems!....but this one was very enjoyable and amazing....so much packed in a few lines....very nicely written...



(Author)
You i live in Saudi A rabia? WOW!!!!!! How historical. thanks for the encouraging review. read on!!!! A*C*

 andycapped replied on May 14, 2010


Haha yeah i live in saudi arabia!!!...weird right?...haha....i wonder what you're thinking right now...either you're questioning my english...or are just down right scared...dont worry i dont bite!!...haha

 Hannah92 replied on May 14, 2010


(Author)
NO FEARS, JUST AMAZED TO TALK WITH PEOPLE ON THE OTHER SIDE OF THE WORLD. LOL!! PLUS,YOU LIVE IN A SUCH OF A HISTURIC PLACE. KEEP IN TOUCH, A*C*

 andycapped replied on May 14, 2010


I like your perspective of saudi...i appreciate minds like these...very open-minded.......free to make their own judgments...

 Hannah92 replied on May 15, 2010




darkelegy
May 11, 2010
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wow...dark, gloom in peril! I love this 14 line beauty AC! pungent stench, from vomit the demons are being fed...yeh! Wicked! keep it up AC!

darkelegy...



(Author)
THANKS,BRO!!! I'M GLAD YOU LIKRD IT. READ ON !!!1 A*C*

 andycapped replied on May 14, 2010




Pandora
May 10, 2010
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WOW
Truth be told, your rendition of fear and horror is truly just that.... fear and horror... well done. Cant wait to see what you write about next.



(Author)
THANKS FOR THE REVIEW. " SHOCK POETRY" BE THY NAME. A*C*

 andycapped replied on May 11, 2010




tarantulla81
May 09, 2010
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i can honestly say i love this work. it describes fear and terror in a very ingenious way. also the spiritual aspects are very well done. chilling work with a perfect flow.
i really enjoyed this a lot. thank you.



(Author)
THANK YOU. I'M GLAD YOU HAVE ENJOYED IT.14TEEN LINES W/ A RHYME, CAN WE CALL IT A SONNET? LOL!! THANKS,AGAIN!!!!!!!!!! A*C*

 andycapped replied on May 09, 2010


your welcome

 tarantulla81 replied on May 09, 2010




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