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Guilt and pain


Author: ThunderStorm
Created: April 03, 2010 at 04:27 pm
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: Sad | Love | Fantasy
Entry Stats: 3.25 Stars by 2 users with 3 comments 204 views

Guilt and pain 
With the tears of guilt and pain.

I have suffer misery with the lost of my grandpa.

I wish he was still alive right now.

My pain is never the Answer to set my will.

My Destiny will come soon in 3 1/2 months.

I love my Brothers and sisters here at writers-network.

My Friendship will never Die to the very end.

I guide them to Respect each other.

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Comments & Reviews

Aljosa
April 06, 2010

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think a bit positive and in the end we all must face the fact we will die sooner or l8er :/
sry for your gramps...but keep on roling as we punk rockers say.. good luck and keep on writing

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bluesphynx
April 05, 2010

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Positive!
Feelings are important. Stay positive!

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sarahcoburn
April 03, 2010

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confusing
i dont understand wat ur trying to write. it sound like u have a good plan but.....? i dont quite understand this

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