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Venus from Mars



Author: MagicMJ
Created: April 02, 2010 at 10:13 pm
Entry Type: Poem, M (16+)
Category: Love | General/Other | General/Other
Entry Stats: 4.5 Stars by 1 users with 1 comments 177 views

Venus from Mars 
Feelings rioting inside me
Confused of what i have to be
Broken 'cause i can never be
The person that i wanted to be

I love her, but that can never be
My love will remain forever be
A dream and just a fantasy
Hidden deep within, as misery

As long as i feel coward
To reveal my true self
I will forever be damned
Living hallow for love

I just wish i could have the guts
To tell her how she means a lot
In this world of mine
Where I am Venus but feel I am from Mars

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Last Modified: November 03, 2010 at 08:42 am

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Comments & Reviews

andycapped
April 02, 2010

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GREAT JOB TRYING TO MAKE SOMETHING CLOSE A ND EMOTIONAL. IT WAS ALITTLE ROUGH AROUND THE EDGES,BUT, IT STILL TURNED OUT ALRIGHT. THANKS FOR SHARING. A*C*

MagicMJ
April 03, 2010
(Creator)
thanks for the thoughts... deeply appreciated.....

many thanks...






      

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