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Author: MagicMJ
Created: April 02, 2010 at 07:33 am
Entry Type: Poem, G (All)
Category: Spiritual | General/Other | General/Other
Entry Stats: 4.66 Stars by 3 users with 4 comments 156 views

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I cry but without tears
I laugh but without a smile
I breathe but without air
I live but without a life

I journeyed through the path
Full of darkness and hate
Where wounds wouldn't heal
And bodies scream in pain

Where death is a salvation
But no one will gain
Forever will be damned
Abandoned and cursed are all we are

But amidst this agonizing world
I stumbled on a name
a name that has been long carved
Carved, sealed and taken in vain

The name is Jesus
He's been waiting and wanting
Needing and crying
Longing for the time, He will be called upon

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Last Modified: November 03, 2010 at 08:36 am


Author Notes
I was looking through some old papers and i stumbled on this one. just like to share. I don't know when I wrote this but i think i was going through difficult times then. It has no title and can't think of one right now.


 

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Comments & Reviews ( X 3)

andycapped
April 02, 2010

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VERY SAD AND DARK. WELL WRITEN. HOPE TIMES HAVE CHANGED? GOD JOB!! THANKS FOR THE DARKNESS !! A*C*

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JonLondon
April 02, 2010

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This was written from the heart, that's for sure...no one really knows why..when we're at our lowest...the poet which lives within us all - writes their soul on paper...This proves there's truth in that..............well expressed my friend (poet)

MagicMJ
April 02, 2010
(Creator)
Hi JonLondon!

Thanks a lot for the nice words...

Glad you liked it....



eliza
April 02, 2010

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liked this so much
this is a great parodox to me it could compares your struggle to the struggle of christ with the cross ......even though i am not a religios person ..i think it was well wriiten and well animated ...well done eliza

MagicMJ
April 02, 2010
(Creator)
Thanks a lot Eliza!

MagicMJ
April 02, 2010
(Creator)
Thanks a lot Eliza!



Punk_Pri
April 02, 2010

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Well done
I , myself, am not Christian but i do like this poem. Well written and We all go through those times. I rely on God.

Well done and very well written. I love love love the first paragraph.

It makes you consider if those things were true. Interesting topic.

I , too, believe in the power of religion.

Well done,
Punk_Pri

MagicMJ
April 02, 2010
(Creator)
Thanks a lot!!

Glad you liked it...






      

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