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♥ A Poem by iviedoeloves ♥

Author: PRO iviedoeloves
Created: July 09, 2005 at 12:25 am
Upload Type: Poem, G (All)  
Category: Personal | General/Other | General/Other
Upload Stats: 4.5 Stars by 2 users with 4 comments and 556 views

~Coat Accepted~  

~~Coat Accepted~~

If I told you that I love you,
Just what would you say?
Would you ask me to goon talking?
Or would you turn and walk away?
If I bared my soul with what
Is on my sleeve,
Would you ask me for my coat?
Or would you ask me just to leave?
There are many loves I have for you.
Each one is perfectly
True and blue.

Iíd like to goon about it,
But Iím afraid you have
Some doubt about it.
No matter dear,
For I must express whatís on my mind
Youíre the type of person
I must have in my life.
Thereís no room for doom sayers
Or scraping past the dust
Itís you I really need to have,
I need to have you I must!

Youíre wonderful beyond compare,
Thereís just no disputing this,
And just knowing that youíre here
Leaves me in washes of bliss.
So are you able to take
What Iím telling you?
Would you turn your heart
Towards me too?
Because all I really want to say,
Is that
I truly adore you.

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July 12, 2005
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Words that warm a tired soul and rythem to accent the way that you adore.You are the only person I actually look forward to reading when you have new stuff.

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July 10, 2005
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You have been counting syllables I see, and making poems that ROCK!
Well the guy(your husband?) who is on the recieving end of this, is a lucky man. Bless you Iviedo.

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July 09, 2005
very beautiful love poem,great write and read, so glad we are back on, been on vac. for a week now, just got home to find the site back up, so glad I was having withdrawels, take care,

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July 09, 2005
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"goon" should be "go on" But other than that, I LOVE THIS POEM!!! IT IS TRUELY AMAZING!!! Keep it up Ivie!


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